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This Saturday Spankings post is a continuation from my WIP, Running For her Life. Hope you enjoy!
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Meet Claire and Nick:
Claire is a 32 year old athlete, trying to qualify for the Olympic Trials. She has a past full of emotional and physical injuries.
Nick is a 36 year old coach, a hard, authoritative man who pushes his athletes to their limit.
Claire is confused by her attraction to her new coach, feeling that he could never fall for a woman like her. Will she stick around, accept what he has to offer, and finally learn to ask for what she wants, or will she run?
Will Nick learn to trust his instincts and guide Claire towards her goal and a possible future together, or will he shut down emotionally, and lose another woman in his life?
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Today’s scene continues in the training room. After an ugly war of words between Claire and Morgan, Nick decides he has had enough. He takes both women to the training room for a little “corrective action”. After Morgan leaves, Claire is left to feel the wrath of her coach / boyfriend. To see the first part of this scene, click here. Here is the continuation of the scene. Part 2.
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Claire’s heartbeat was racing, and her feet felt like lead, as she crept toward the door, closed it, and turned the lock.
Nick had already turned on the ice baths, and was giving her a thoughtful look. Could he see how nervous she was, and how absolutely and embarrassingly aroused she was by this show of dominance?
She slowly walked back to where he stood, his arms folded, his stance casual. His whole body exuded power and authority, making her tremble with excitement. She swallowed and looked at the ice baths in confusion.
“Background sounds to drown out the noise,” he explained casually.
“Wh-what noise?”
“I’m going to spank you, Claire.”
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Oh and now I remember I missed last week!! Gotta go back and figure out what she did. Very nice, Katherine. Well done.
Thanks, Dinah!
It will make more sense, definitely 🙂
“I’m going to spank you, Claire.” – a jaw dropping moment! mmm mmm!
Thanks, Renee!
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How thoughtful of him to mask the sound! LOL.
You never know, Cara. He could get a whole line of women wanting their turn. Must be discreet and protect his hand.
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Thanks!
I believe it with how yummy Nick is!
I had no idea what a trigger that line was until I read it: ‘Background noise.’ Talk about squirming in your seat! lol Wonderful, Katherine!
OMG, yay! I got so lucky!
I couldn’t think of a doggone title, and was trying to get it posted before 11 pm. hehe
Thanks, Maren!
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“I’m going to spank you, Claire” – Gulp
Lovely set up Katherine
Thanks, Tara!
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I love the ice baths. It makes me curious if her heated bottom is going anywhere near them after he gives her the spanking.
Wonderful snippet.
Ohhhh, that is a really good idea, LA!
I actually had not thought of that, but that would be fun to add in.
Thanks!
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Fantastic finish!
Thanks, Emily!
Oh my, this is tense! The last line made me shiver.
Yay! That’s what I was hoping for!
Thanks, Sue!
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Oh yeah! Loved this….great job.
Thanks, Suzy!
Very sexy stuff. Love how in control he is.
Thanks, John!
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Love the background noise. LOL They have their own soundtrack 😉
Thanks, Thianna!
LOL 🙂
I think those are my favorite words ever – ‘I’m going to spank you…’ YUM!!
Mine too, Natasha.
My other fave is “Here’s some wine.”
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Yeah, gotta get some background noise going! Great detail. He thinks of everything.
LOL, Thanks Normandie! I actually stole the idea from my husband.
I always know when I am about to be spanked- he turns on the bathroom fan.
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I like the way your snippets end, except for the fact that their ending. I want to read more – come on, give us the rest.
Thanks so much, PK!
8 sentences is really hard to do!
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Geeze, I’m supposed to be a writer and I put their for they’re? How embarrassing. I’ll plead extreme fatigue.
LOL, PK! I wasn’t going to say anything 🙂 after reading 30+ posts, it’s probably easy to do!
Of course, you could have just said it was the auto correct. 🙂
BTW, I just received my edits, and apparently had my MC waiting with *baited* (fish smelling ) breath!
LOL
LOL, I love when she asks ‘what noise?’ and he casually replies. ‘I’m going to spank you.’ Whew, that was hot!
Thanks, Mary Sue!
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He might have just as well said, “I’m going to buy you a winning lottery ticket, Claire.” Your writing is wonderful.
LOL, I almost spit out my coffee, Trish! 🙂
Thank you so much!
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This is such a sexy scene to read!
Thanks, Corinne!
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oh I love how calm he is! and the noise to cover her noises 😀 hot!
Thanks, Joelle!
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Nothing more hot than the simplest reply from a dominant man-“I’m going to spank you.”
I agree, Abbie!
Those are my favorite words from a man! 🙂
Maybe she’ll have to soak her sore butt in the ice bath.
LOL, Angie! I was just thinking the same thing!
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